His Bloody Project

On a small island in Scotland's Outer Hebrides a shocking crime occurred in an otherwise peaceful crofter community in July 1857. Angus MacPhee, a troubled and troublesome man, brutally murdered his parents and aunt, then took off fearing capture. Locals formed a hunting party and found him, taking him to Inverness for trial. MacPhee's siblings are left to pick up the pieces.

Graeme Macrae Burnet has taken this true crime story and composed a novella, Benbecula (2025), narrated by MacPhee's brother Malcolm. Told retrospectively, Angus first appears to be a lazy man in a household which tolerates his weirdness. His father is disinterested, his mother is only focussed on the hearth fire at the croft, and his siblings are busy working to bring in sea ware to make a small living off selling kelp. Angus smokes his pipe and pleasures himself, without lifting a finger to help. His sibling do their best to avoid him.

Neighbours are worried about Angus. His creepiness disturbs passersby, and his odd behaviour has caused concern. One day he behaves so erratically that he is shackled and forced to remain at home, restrained. As the days pass, the family gives him more latitude and he seems to be better. Until he commits the horrendous act of violence for which he is incarcerated. Several years after the crime Malcolm MacPhee recounts the tale and the aftermath, alone from the croft. 

I always admire Macrae Burnet's writing style. By using Malcolm as narrator, he inhabits the brevity of the man's storytelling and infuses it with the local dialect. Readers can see the bigger picture, and read between the lines of what is not being overtly said. Relying on the scant records from witness statements, which would have been translated from Gaelic and made to sound more proper than the words of the illiterate locals, Macrae Burnet builds a whole world. He is able to depict the bleakness of this life - growing potatoes, harvesting kelp - on this small island. I appreciated the way the narration switched between Malcolm's later recall, and the lead up to the crimes. 

In less than 170 pages, Macrae Burnet has crafted a wonderful novella. While I greatly enjoyed it, I did not feel it was as good as Macrae Burnet's His Bloody Project (2015) which I absolutely adored. My review of Macrae Burnet's Case Study (2021) is also available on this blog.